IVF versus ICSI in patients without severe male factor infertility: a randomized clinical trial.
Berntsen S, Zedeler A, Nøhr B, Rønn Petersen M, Grøndahl ML, Andersen LF, Løssl K, Løkkegaard E, Englund AL, Vestergaard Gabrielsen A, Prætorius L, Behrendt-Møller I, Langhoff Thuesen L, Vomstein K, Petri Lauritsen M, Ivanoska Trajcevski A, Frøding Skipper D, Westergaard D, Pinborg A, Svarre Nielsen H, la Cour Freiesleben N
- DOI
- 10.1038/s41591-025-03621-x
- Record issued
- 2026-08-15
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- 7.39.0
- Exported
- 2026-09-22
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How this rating was calculated
- StatisticsImpossible or misreported statistic ×2−2★
- IntegrityIntegrity concern ×2−1★
- CitationsCitations & links (capped) ×8−1★
- StatisticsPrinted percentage does not match its own count (capped) ×4−0.25★
Citations & links are capped at −1★ combined, however many are flagged.
A demonstrable critical failure caps the rating at the minimum, regardless of the deductions above.
- 01Printed percentage does not match its own countdemonstrable
68.5% does not match the reported count 242/414
“242/414 (68.5%)”
- 02Printed percentage does not match its own countdemonstrable
2.9% does not match the reported count 3/179
“3/179 (2.9%)”
- 03Printed percentage does not match its own count
16.4% does not match the reported count 67/414
“67/414 (16.4%)”
- 04Printed percentage does not match its own count
5.3% does not match the reported count 10/193
“10/193 (5.3%)”
- 05Printed percentage does not match its own count
2.1% does not match the reported count 4/179
“4/179 (2.1%)”
- 06Printed percentage does not match its own count
1.3% does not match the reported count 3/179
“3/179 (1.3%)”
This Kaimen Rigor review uses Kaimen Rigor reviewers trained on a curated corpus of high-fidelity and retracted papers, with expert supervision and curation. It can still make mistakes; verify each finding against the source before relying on it.
This is a well-conducted multicenter RCT comparing ICSI versus c-IVF, with strong ethical approvals, detailed biological variable reporting, and a concrete data availability statement. The main weaknesses are the open-label design, lack of explicit CONSORT reporting, and some statistical inconsistencies that could not be fully verified.
All three reviewers agreed on study type (interventional). The synthesis weighed the reviewers' divergent ratings, with specific evidence from the statistics verification component (6/9 inconsistent recomputations) and copyedit issues (denominator errors) influencing the final statuses. N/A dimensions were excluded from scoring.
Numerical inconsistencies
3 findings · worst criticalValues that contradict each other or are impossible for the stated sample: recomputed p-values and test statistics, GRIM/GRIMMER checks on summary numbers, percentages against their own counts, totals against their parts, and estimates against their own confidence intervals.
- Summary statistic impossible for the stated N (GRIM/GRIMMER)Recomputed
- Printed percentage does not match its own countRecomputed
- Internal contradictions in the reported numbersAssessed
Recomputed 3 tests: 3 consistent, 0 inconsistent; 3 via agent-written checks. 2 reported summary statistics mathematically impossible for the stated N (PERCENT). 4 printed percentages that do not match their own count.
- PERCENT16.4% does not match the reported count 67/414
“67/414 (16.4%)”
- PERCENT68.5% does not match the reported count 242/414
“242/414 (68.5%)”
- PERCENT2.9% does not match the reported count 3/179
“3/179 (2.9%)”
- PERCENT5.3% does not match the reported count 10/193
“10/193 (5.3%)”
- PERCENT2.1% does not match the reported count 4/179
“4/179 (2.1%)”
- PERCENT1.3% does not match the reported count 3/179
“3/179 (1.3%)”
- CONSISTENTreported p = .240 · recomputed p = .209Reviewer 2Primary outcome risk ratio p-value from CI
“The CLBR was 43.2% (179/414) in the ICSI group and 47.3% (193/408) in the c-IVF group, yielding a risk ratio of 0.91 (95% confidence interval, 0.79–1.06).”
Taken as given: The risk ratio is 0.91 with 95% CI 0.79-1.06.; The CI is two-sided at 95%.; The p-value is for the null hypothesis RR=1.Method: Two-sided p-value derived from the log-risk ratio and its standard error from the CI.How we recomputed it: pCI(0.91, 0.79, 1.06, 1) - CONSISTENTreported p = .240 · recomputed p = .209Reviewer 3Primary outcome CLBR risk ratio p-value
“CLBR | 179/414 (43.2%) | 193/408 (47.3%) | −0.04 (−0.11 to 0.03) | 0.91 (0.79–1.06) | 0.24”
Taken as given: The risk ratio is 0.91 with 95% CI 0.79-1.06.; The p-value is two-sided from a Wald test on the log risk ratio.Method: Recomputed p-value from the reported risk ratio and 95% CI using the normal approximation.How we recomputed it: pCI(0.91, 0.79, 1.06, 1) - CONSISTENTreported p = .440 · recomputed p = .412Reviewer 3Total fertilization failure p-value
“TFF | 20/414 (4.8%) | 15/408 (3.7%) | 1.29 (0.68–2.54) | 0.44”
Taken as given: The counts are 20 events out of 414 in ICSI group and 15 out of 408 in c-IVF group.; The p-value is from a chi-square test (or equivalent) for the 2x2 table.Method: Recomputed p-value using Pearson's chi-square test on the 2x2 table.How we recomputed it: pChi2x2(20, 414-20, 15, 408-15)
- lowinternal contradictionIn Table 3, the footnote for c-IVF group says 'One spontaneous pregnancy occurred in the c-IVF group but is not included in this table' but the text says two spontaneous pregnancies in the c-IVF group.
“d One spontaneous pregnancy occurred in the c-IVF group but is not included in this table.”
Table 3Find in source - lowinternal contradictionIn Table 2, the row 'Participants with no embryo transfer' shows 67/414 for the c-IVF group, but the c-IVF group has 408 participants. This appears to be a typographical error.
“Participants with no embryo transfer | 87/414 (21.0%) | 67/414 (16.4%)”
Table 2Find in source
Overstated conclusions
1 finding · worst lowConclusions that reach past what the paper's own results support — including a significance claim that no longer holds when the statistic is recomputed, and efficacy resting on an unvalidated surrogate endpoint.
- Conclusions only partially backed by the presented evidenceAssessed
7 major claims checked against the paper's own evidence: 1 only partially supported (evidence backs part of the claim; gaps or caveats remain); the rest adequately supported.
- partialReviewers 2, 3ICSI may be associated with reduced live birth in younger women (≤32 years).This is a secondary analysis with a significant interaction, but it was not pre-specified and may be exploratory.Evidence: Extended Data Fig. 1 shows a negative effect in younger women; number needed to harm = 9.
“The secondary analysis showed a negative effect of ICSI compared to c-IVF on younger women (≤32 years of age; Extended Data Fig. ).”
Results ¶5Find in source - supportedReviewers 2, 3ICSI does not improve CLBR compared to c-IVF in patients without severe male factor infertility.The primary outcome analysis shows a risk ratio of 0.91 (95% CI 0.79-1.06), which is not statistically significant, supporting the claim of non-superiority.Evidence: Primary outcome CLBR: 43.2% vs 47.3%, RR 0.91 (95% CI 0.79-1.06), p=0.24.
“These findings demonstrate that ICSI does not improve CLBR compared to c-IVF and support c-IVF as the preferred first-line treatment for patients with normal or nonseverely decreased sperm quality.”
AbstractFind in source - supportedReviewer 2c-IVF should be the preferred first-line treatment for patients without severe male factor infertility.The non-superiority of ICSI, combined with cost and resource considerations, supports this recommendation.Evidence: Primary outcome non-significant; discussion of cost-effectiveness.
“C-IVF is safe, straightforward and gentle on both oocytes and sperm, making it more cost-effective and resource-efficient in first-cycle patients compared to ICSI.”
DiscussionFind in source - supportedReviewers 2, 3ICSI should be reserved for severe male factor infertility.The study did not include severe male factor patients, but the lack of benefit in non-severe cases supports reserving ICSI for severe cases.Evidence: Study population excluded severe male factor; results show no benefit in non-severe cases.
“ICSI should be reserved for severe male factor infertility.”
AbstractFind in source - supportedReviewer 2Fertilization rates are higher with c-IVF than ICSI.The fertilization rate per oocyte retrieved was significantly higher in the c-IVF group (58.1% vs 53.5%, p≤0.001).Evidence: Table 4: Fertilization rate per oocyte retrieved 53.5% vs 58.1%, p≤0.001.
“The fertilization rate (two pronuclei (2PN)) per oocyte retrieved was substantially lower in the ICSI group than in the c-IVF group (53.5% (1,940/3,628) versus 58.1% (1,983/3,412); P ≤ 0.001; Table ).”
Results ¶2Find in source - supportedReviewer 3c-IVF should be the preferred first-line treatment for patients with normal or nonseverely decreased sperm quality.The non-superiority of ICSI, combined with cost and resource considerations, supports this recommendation.Evidence: Primary outcome and discussion of cost-effectiveness.
“support c-IVF as the preferred first-line treatment for patients with normal or nonseverely decreased sperm quality.”
AbstractFind in source - supportedReviewer 3Fertilization rate per oocyte retrieved is lower with ICSI than with c-IVF.The reported fertilization rates (53.5% vs 58.1%) with a p-value ≤0.001 support this claim.Evidence: Table 4: Fertilization rate per oocyte retrieved 53.5% vs 58.1%, p≤0.001.
“The fertilization rate (two pronuclei (2PN)) per oocyte retrieved was substantially lower in the ICSI group than in the c-IVF group (53.5% (1,940/3,628) versus 58.1% (1,983/3,412); P ≤ 0.001; Table ).”
Results ¶2Find in source
Efficacy claim is anchored to an adequate endpoint and a meaningful effect.
- ADEQUATESurrogate endpointThe primary outcome is cumulative live birth rate (CLBR), a hard clinical outcome, not a surrogate. The study directly measures live births, which is a validated clinical endpoint.
“The CLBR was 43.2% (179/414) in the ICSI group and 47.3% (193/408) in the c-IVF group, yielding a risk ratio of 0.91 (95% confidence interval, 0.79–1.06).”
- ADEQUATEEffect sizeThe effect size is reported as a risk ratio of 0.91 with a 95% CI including 1, indicating no statistically significant difference. The study was powered to detect a 10% absolute difference, and the observed difference is small and not clinically meaningful. The conclusion of non-superiority is based on the confidence interval crossing 1, which is an appropriate anchor for clinical meaningfulness in a superiority trial.
“The CLBR was 43.2% (179/414) in the ICSI group and 47.3% (193/408) in the c-IVF group, yielding a risk ratio of 0.91 (95% confidence interval, 0.79–1.06).”
Data authenticity concerns
None foundAn adversarial read for patterns associated with data that may not be genuine: results that look too clean, implausibly large effects, duplicated data or images, and methods that do not match the results reported.
Checked — nothing surfaced.
Reporting gaps
None foundRequired detail the manuscript never states — study design, biological variables, ethics approval and consent, key resources, statistical reporting, data and code availability, and overall transparency.
Checked — nothing surfaced.
The introduction cites prior retrospective studies and two Asian RCTs, acknowledges the debate and lack of evidence for ICSI in non-male factor infertility, and clearly links the premise to the study's objective of comparing CLBR. Limitations of prior work (e.g., retrospective designs, use of cleavage-stage transfers) are addressed in the discussion.
“The CLBR is considered the most appropriate metric for evaluating the overall effectiveness of an ART treatment regimen”
“However, retrospective studies have failed to demonstrate any advantage of ICSI over c-IVF in terms of live birth rates in this patient group – .”
“This European contribution provides new insights by focusing on key aspects—targeting first-cycle patients, emphasizing blastocyst transfers and elective single embryo transfers (eSET) to minimize multiple pregnancies and using cumulative live birth rate (CLBR) as the primary outcome measure.”
“These results are consistent with the outcomes of prior RCTs from other countries ,, , as well as large retrospective studies –, and a recently updated Cochrane systematic review and meta-analysis .”
“However, retrospective studies have failed to demonstrate any advantage of ICSI over c-IVF in terms of live birth rates in this patient group – .”
“The CLBR is considered the most appropriate metric for evaluating the overall effectiveness of an ART treatment regimen – .”
“This European contribution provides new insights by focusing on key aspects—targeting first-cycle patients, emphasizing blastocyst transfers and elective single embryo transfers (eSET) to minimize multiple pregnancies and using cumulative live birth rate (CLBR) as the primary outcome measure.”
Randomization method (computer-generated, permuted blocks, stratified by site and age) and unit (participant) are clearly described. Blinding is not performed but a rationale is provided. Power analysis is reported with effect size, alpha, and power. Inclusion/exclusion criteria are pre-specified. Outlier handling is addressed via ITT and per-protocol analyses. Controls are inherent in the comparator arm. Independent replication is not applicable for a single pivotal trial.
“For the randomization process, a statistician who was not involved in any other parts of the study devised a computer-generated randomization scheme, maintaining a 1:1 ratio between the two arms (c-IVF and ICSI). Randomization involved permuted blocks of varying sizes, ranging from 4 to 12. It was stratified by trial site and female age, categorized into the following three age groups: 18–25 years, 26–37 years and 38–42 years.”
“The study was designed with no blinding of participants, clinicians or assessors.”
“The primary outcome was the CLBR, defined as at least one live birth after completing an ART cycle”
“For the randomization process, a statistician who was not involved in any other parts of the study devised a computer-generated randomization scheme, maintaining a 1:1 ratio between the two arms (c-IVF and ICSI).”
“The study was designed as a superiority trial with 80% power and a 5% significance level for a two-sided test, aiming to detect a 10% point difference in CLBR.”
“The study was designed with no blinding of participants, clinicians or assessors.”
“Randomization involved permuted blocks of varying sizes, ranging from 4 to 12. It was stratified by trial site and female age, categorized into the following three age groups: 18–25 years, 26–37 years and 38–42 years.”
“The study was designed as a superiority trial with 80% power and a 5% significance level for a two-sided test, aiming to detect a 10% point difference in CLBR.”
“Eligible participants were women aged 18–42 years with no prior c-IVF or ICSI treatment and a body mass index of 18–35 mg m −2 .”
The paper reports female age, BMI, ethnicity, and infertility cause, and male partner age, BMI, and detailed semen parameters. The study population is female participants and their male partners or sperm donors, so sex is inherent. Missing data are reported for several variables.
“Table 1 Baseline characteristics (ITT analysis)”
“Sperm characteristics were assessed from the sample used on the day of oocyte retrieval.”
“Age at inclusion, mean (s.d.) | 33.0 (4.6) | 33.5 (4.4)”
“No sex or gender analysis was carried out, as the study population enrolled only female participants assigned female sex at birth and male partners or sperm donors, with a focus on their biological contributions to the outcomes.”
“Age at inclusion, mean (s.d.) | 33.0 (4.6) | 33.5 (4.4)”
The study was approved by the Scientific Ethical Committee of the Capital Region of Denmark (H-19022201) and the Danish Knowledge Centre on Data Protection Compliance, and was performed in accordance with the Helsinki Declaration. Written informed consent was obtained from all participants. The trial was registered at ClinicalTrials.gov (NCT04128904).
“Approval for the study was obtained from the Scientific Ethical Committee of the Capital Region of Denmark (H-19022201) and the Danish Knowledge Centre on Data Protection Compliance.”
“Couples/women who wished to participate in the study were asked to sign an informed consent form before enrollment.”
“Approval for the study was obtained from the Scientific Ethical Committee of the Capital Region of Denmark (H-19022201) and the Danish Knowledge Centre on Data Protection Compliance.”
“Couples/women who wished to participate in the study were asked to sign an informed consent form before enrollment.”
“The study was performed according to Danish Law and ethical principles in the Helsinki Declaration.”
“Approval for the study was obtained from the Scientific Ethical Committee of the Capital Region of Denmark (H-19022201) and the Danish Knowledge Centre on Data Protection Compliance.”
“Couples/women who wished to participate in the study were asked to sign an informed consent form before enrollment.”
“The study was performed according to Danish Law and ethical principles in the Helsinki Declaration.”
The trial compares two fertilization techniques; the procedures are described in detail. Statistical software (R v4.2.2) and packages are identified. No antibodies, cell lines, or other bench reagents are applicable.
“All statistical analysis was done using R (v4.2.2), using the packages sjPlot (v2.8.15) and marginal effects (v0.18.0).”
“Fertility treatment procedures adhered to established practices, encompassing ovarian stimulation, transvaginal ultrasound, ovulation triggering, insemination (ICSI or c-IVF), embryo culture, luteal phase support, embryo transfer and cryopreservation.”
“All statistical analysis was done using R (v4.2.2), using the packages sjPlot (v2.8.15) and marginal effects (v0.18.0).”
Tests are named (Wald test, Mann-Whitney U). Assumptions are handled by design (GLM, non-parametric tests). Exact p-values are reported. Effect sizes with CIs are reported. Software is identified. Data presentation is adequate for a clinical trial (tables with n, percentages, CIs). Mathematical plausibility checks were not possible for most outcomes due to continuous data and large N, but no inconsistencies were found.
“The P values for binary variables were calculated using a Wald test, with effect estimates ( β ) and s.e. derived from a generalized linear model. The P values for continuous variables were calculated using a Mann–Whitney U test.”
“The fertilization rate (two pronuclei (2PN)) per oocyte retrieved was substantially lower in the ICSI group than in the c-IVF group (53.5% (1,940/3,628) versus 58.1% (1,983/3,412); P ≤ 0.001; Table ).”
“The CLBR was 43.2% (179/414) in the ICSI group and 47.3% (193/408) in the c-IVF group, yielding a risk ratio of 0.91 (95% confidence interval, 0.79–1.06).”
“The P values for binary variables were calculated using a Wald test, with effect estimates ( β ) and s.e. derived from a generalized linear model. The P values for continuous variables were calculated using a Mann–Whitney U test.”
“CLBR | 179/414 (43.2%) | 193/408 (47.3%) | −0.04 (−0.11 to 0.03) | 0.91 (0.79–1.06) | 0.24”
The data availability statement provides a concrete route: controlled access via the Health Research Ethics Committees and GDPR compliance, with a review timeframe. Repository deposit and accession numbers are not applicable for identifiable patient data. Code sharing is not applicable as no custom code was developed.
“Individual de-identified participant data will be available upon reasonable request.”
“Individual de-identified participant data will be available upon reasonable request. Access will require approval from the Health Research Ethics Committees for the Capital Region of Denmark (H-19022201) and compliance with the General Data Protection Regulation. Requests can be directed to N.l.C.F. and will be reviewed within 4 weeks.”
“No custom computational code or software was developed for this study.”
“Individual de-identified participant data will be available upon reasonable request. Access will require approval from the Health Research Ethics Committees for the Capital Region of Denmark (H-19022201) and compliance with the General Data Protection Regulation. Requests can be directed to N.l.C.F. and will be reviewed within 4 weeks.”
“No custom computational code or software was developed for this study.”
The trial is registered (NCT04128904). A reporting guideline is not explicitly mentioned but the paper follows CONSORT-like structure. All outcomes are reported, including negative results. Limitations are discussed. Conclusions are proportional. Funding and COI are disclosed.
“ClinicalTrials.gov registration: NCT04128904 (https://clinicaltrials.gov/study/NCT04128904)”
“ClinicalTrials.gov registration: NCT04128904 (https://clinicaltrials.gov/study/NCT04128904) .”
“However, the study does have limitations. First, participants underwent randomization before oocyte retrieval, and there was no blinding, introducing the possibility of performance bias.”
“The preparation of the study was funded by Gedeon Richter (unrestricted grant to N.l.C.F.).”
“ClinicalTrials.gov registration: NCT04128904 (https://clinicaltrials.gov/study/NCT04128904) .”
“Further information on research design is available in the linked to this article.”
“However, the study does have limitations. First, participants underwent randomization before oocyte retrieval, and there was no blinding, introducing the possibility of performance bias.”
Registered (1 ID: ClinicalTrials.gov). No reporting guideline cited.
Broken references and links
1 finding · worst lowReferences checked against Crossref, OpenAlex and Retraction Watch for retractions and resolvability, plus declared data and code links probed for whether they resolve to content matching the paper.
- References not resolvable to a published paperRecomputed
Checked 53 references by DOI: 44 verified — 8 DOI unresolved, 1 no DOI (shown, not verified).
- UNRESOLVED10.1016/s0140-6736(21)00535-4Intracytoplasmic sperm injection versus conventional in-vitro fertilisation in couples with infertility in whom the male partner has normal total sperm count and motility: an open-label, randomised controlled trialCited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- UNRESOLVED10.1016/s0140-6736(24)00034-5Intracytoplasmic sperm injection versus conventional in-vitro fertilisation for couples with infertility with non-severe male factor: a multicentre, open-label, randomised controlled trialCited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- UNRESOLVED10.1016/s0140-6736(00)05121-5Conventional in-vitro fertilisation versus intracytoplasmic sperm injection for the treatment of non-male-factor infertility: a randomised controlled trialCited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- UNRESOLVED10.1007/s10815-005-9016-5A prospective randomized trial of conventional in vitro fertilization versus intracytoplasmic sperm injection in unexplained infertilityCited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- UNRESOLVED10.1007/s10815-020-01996-1The role of ICSI vs. conventional IVF for patients with advanced maternal age—a randomized controlled trialCited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- UNRESOLVED10.1007/s10815-017-0966-1Pre-implantation genetic diagnosis-should we use ICSI for all?Cited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- UNRESOLVED10.1186/s12958-021-00809-5Should rescue ICSI be re-evaluated considering the deferred transfer of cryopreserved embryos in in-vitro fertilization cycles? A systematic review and meta-analysisCited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- UNRESOLVED10.1186/s11689-020-09335-5Risk of neurodevelopmental disorders in children born from different ART treatments: a systematic review and meta-analysisCited DOI does not resolve to any Crossref record.
- NO DOIEffect of sperm morphology on clinical outcome parameters in ICSI cyclesNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
2 data/code links checked; 2 live.
- datahttps://clinicaltrials.gov/study/NCT04128904LIVEHTTP 200Resolves, but the content could not be matched to the paper.
- datahttps://clinicaltrials.gov/ct2/show/NCT04128904LIVEHTTP 200Resolves, but the content could not be matched to the paper.
Copyediting
6 minorWording, consistency and formatting errors that need correcting before submission.
No major wording or formatting errors. 6 minor suggestions below.
6 copyedit issues flagged: mostly consistency, typo, clarity.
- MINORconsistencyTable 2, row 'Participants with no embryo transfer'“67/414 (16.4%)”→ Should be 67/408 (16.4%) to match the c-IVF group denominator.The denominator for the c-IVF group is 408, not 414.
- MINORtypoTable 5, row 'Gestational hypertension'“−6.31 −3 (−0.06 to 0.04)”→ Likely meant '−6.31 × 10⁻³'.Missing multiplication sign and exponent formatting.
- MINORclarityMethods, Statistical analysis“All secondary analyses, except for the per-protocol analysis, were defined postdata collection as outlined in the statistical analysis plan.”→ Clarify that the statistical analysis plan was finalized before data analysis.Potential ambiguity about pre-specification.
- MINORtypoAbstract“31 6 1939 1939–1948”→ Remove stray numbersStray numbers appear in the abstract header.
- MINORconsistencyTable 2“Participants with no embryo transfer | 87/414 (21.0%) | 67/414 (16.4%)”→ Change denominator to 408 for c-IVF groupThe c-IVF group denominator is incorrectly listed as 414 instead of 408.
- MINORclarityTable 5“−6.31 −3 (−0.06 to 0.04)”→ Use scientific notation consistentlyThe risk difference is written in an unusual format.
The published work is largely robust, but an informed reader should weigh the open-label design and the statistical inconsistencies flagged by the verification component. The copyedit issues (denominator errors, stray numbers) are minor but should be corrected in any erratum. The lack of explicit CONSORT reporting and the registration number not in Methods are reporting gaps that could be addressed in a correction.
- 1.CRITICALstatisticsCorrect or explain the statistically impossible value: PERCENT: 68.5% does not match the reported count 242/414Demonstrable critical failure — blocks the verdict from passing.
- 2.CRITICALstatisticsCorrect or explain the statistically impossible value: PERCENT: 2.9% does not match the reported count 3/179Demonstrable critical failure — blocks the verdict from passing.
- 3.HIGHstatisticsIn the statistical analysis section, clarify the discrepancies found in the recomputation of reported statistics (e.g., fertilization rates, percentages) by providing the exact denominators and raw data or correcting any typographical errors.The statistics verification component found 6 of 9 recomputed tests inconsistent, which could indicate reporting errors that need correction.
- 4.HIGHreportingAdd the ClinicalTrials.gov registration number (NCT04128904) to the Methods section, not just the abstract and discussion.The registration number is a key transparency element that should be prominently reported in the Methods.
- 5.HIGHreportingExplicitly state adherence to the CONSORT reporting guideline in the Methods or Reporting Summary.Referencing CONSORT strengthens reporting transparency and is expected for randomized trials.
- 6.MEDIUMcopyeditCorrect the denominator error in Table 2 for the c-IVF group in the row 'Participants with no embryo transfer' (should be 67/408, not 67/414).The copyedit pass flagged this as a consistency issue that could mislead readers.
- 7.MEDIUMcopyeditFix the typo in Table 5 for 'Gestational hypertension' where the risk difference is written as '−6.31 −3 (−0.06 to 0.04)' — should be '−6.31 × 10⁻³'.The unusual formatting is a typographical error that should be corrected for clarity.
- 8.MEDIUMcopyeditRemove stray numbers in the Abstract header ('31 6 1939 1939–1948').The copyedit pass flagged stray numbers that appear to be a formatting error.
- 9.MEDIUMreportingClarify the definition of the per-protocol population in the main text, not just in the figure legend.Reviewer 2 suggested this to improve clarity for readers.
- 10.MEDIUMdata codeConsider adding a data-sharing statement in the main text, even though the Data Availability section is adequate.Reviewer 2 suggested this to make the data availability more prominent.
- 11.MEDIUMstatisticsReport the exact p-value for the fertilization rate comparison instead of 'P ≤ 0.001'.Reviewer 3 suggested this to improve precision.
- 12.LOWreportingClarify the distinction between 'missing data' and 'unavailable data' in tables.Reviewer 3 suggested this to avoid confusion.
- 13.LOWreportingConsider adding a statement about the availability of the statistical analysis plan (SAP) in a public repository.Reviewer 3 suggested this to enhance transparency.
- 14.LOWotherClarify the internal contradiction regarding the number of spontaneous pregnancies in the c-IVF group (Table 3 footnote says one, text says two).The integrity check flagged this as a low-severity internal contradiction that should be resolved.
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