Tirzepatide for the Treatment of Obstructive Sleep Apnea and Obesity.
Malhotra A, Grunstein RR, Fietze I, Weaver TE, Redline S, Azarbarzin A, Sands SA, Schwab RJ, Dunn JP, Chakladar S, Bunck MC, Bednarik J, SURMOUNT-OSA Investigators
- DOI
- 10.1056/NEJMoa2404881
- Record issued
- 2026-08-16
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- 7.39.0
- Exported
- 2026-09-20
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How this rating was calculated
- IntegrityIntegrity concern−0.5★
- ClaimsEfficacy rests on an unvalidated surrogate endpoint−0.5★
- ReportingData & code availability partially met−0.25★
- No data or code availability links were detected to verify.
- 01Efficacy rests on an unvalidated surrogate endpoint
The primary efficacy claim is based on the change in apnea-hypopnea index (AHI), a surrogate endpoint for obstructive sleep apnea. Although the paper cites clinical significance thresholds for AHI, it does not demonstrate target engagement at the tested dose (e.g., PK/PD data) nor cite validated evidence linking AHI reduction to hard clinical outcomes such as cardiovascular events or mortality. The paper acknowledges that PAP therapy, which improves AHI, has not been shown to reduce cardiovascular outcomes, and the trials were not designed to assess long-term cardiovascular outcomes.
“The primary end point was the change in the apnea–hypopnea index (AHI, the number of apneas and hypopneas during an hour of sleep) from baseline.”
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The paper reports two well-designed phase 3 randomized controlled trials with rigorous methodology, clear reporting of demographics, ethical approvals, and statistical analyses. The main weakness is the vague data availability statement, which lacks specific mechanisms for data access. Minor reporting gaps include the absence of statistical software identification and explicit CONSORT adherence.
Both reviewers classified the study as interventional, and this synthesis adopts that classification. The evaluation covered all eight dimensions; several sub-criteria were marked not applicable for human trials (e.g., replicate distinction, controls, species/strain, housing, IACUC). The statistics verification recomputed only 2 tests (both consistent); other statistics were not machine-verified. Citation check found no retracted or unresolved references.
Numerical inconsistencies
1 finding · worst lowValues that contradict each other or are impossible for the stated sample: recomputed p-values and test statistics, GRIM/GRIMMER checks on summary numbers, percentages against their own counts, totals against their parts, and estimates against their own confidence intervals.
- Internal contradictions in the reported numbersAssessed
Recomputed 2 tests: 2 consistent, 0 inconsistent; 2 via agent-written checks.
- CONSISTENTreported p < .001 · recomputed p = <.001Reviewers 1, 2Primary endpoint trial 1: treatment difference in AHI change
“for an estimated treatment difference of −20.0 events per hour (95% CI, −25.8 to −14.2) (P<0.001)”
Taken as given: The estimate is the treatment difference in means.; The 95% CI is two-sided.; The test is two-sided.Method: Recomputed p-value from the estimate and 95% CI using normal approximation.How we recomputed it: pCI(-20.0, -25.8, -14.2, 0) - CONSISTENTreported p < .001 · recomputed p = <.001Reviewers 1, 2Primary endpoint trial 2: treatment difference in AHI change
“for an estimated treatment difference of −23.8 events per hour (95% CI, −29.6 to −17.9), (P<0.001)”
Taken as given: The estimate is the treatment difference in means.; The 95% CI is two-sided.; The test is two-sided.Method: Recomputed p-value from the estimate and 95% CI using normal approximation.How we recomputed it: pCI(-23.8, -29.6, -17.9, 0)
- lowinternal contradictionIn Table 1, the total N for trial 1 is 234, but the sum of tirzepatide (114) and placebo (120) is 234, which is consistent. However, in Table 4, the N for tirzepatide in trial 2 is 119, while in Table 1 it is 120. This discrepancy is likely due to one participant not receiving the drug, but it is not explicitly explained.
“Tirzepatide N = 119 Placebo N = 114”
Table 4Find in source
Overstated conclusions
1 finding · worst highConclusions that reach past what the paper's own results support — including a significance claim that no longer holds when the statistic is recomputed, and efficacy resting on an unvalidated surrogate endpoint.
- Efficacy rests on an unvalidated surrogate endpointAssessed
7 major claims checked against the paper's own evidence: all adequately supported.
- supportedReviewer 1Tirzepatide reduced AHI in adults with moderate-to-severe OSA and obesity.The primary endpoint results show significant reductions in AHI in both trials.Evidence: Trial 1: treatment difference −20.0 events/hr (95% CI −25.8 to −14.2, P<0.001); Trial 2: −23.8 events/hr (95% CI −29.6 to −17.9, P<0.001).
In trial 1, the mean change in AHI at week 52 was −25.3 events per hour ... for an estimated treatment difference of −20.0 events per hour (95% CI, −25.8 to −14.2) (P<0.001).
Abstractreviewer’s wording - supportedReviewer 1Tirzepatide reduced body weight, hypoxic burden, hsCRP, and systolic blood pressure.Key secondary endpoints show significant improvements in these measures.Evidence: Table 2 reports significant changes in body weight, hypoxic burden, hsCRP, and systolic blood pressure.
“tirzepatide reduced the AHI, body weight, hypoxic burden, hsCRP concentration, and systolic blood pressure”
ConclusionFind in source - supportedReviewers 1, 2Tirzepatide improved sleep-related patient-reported outcomes.Pooled PROMIS-SRI and PROMIS-SD scores improved significantly.Evidence: Table 3 shows significant improvements in PROMIS-SRI and PROMIS-SD.
“improved sleep-related patient-reported outcomes”
ConclusionFind in source - supportedReviewers 1, 2The safety profile of tirzepatide was consistent with previous trials.Adverse events were mostly gastrointestinal and mild-to-moderate, consistent with known profile.Evidence: Safety results in Table 4 and discussion.
“The safety profile of tirzepatide was consistent with that observed in previous trials.”
Discussion ¶3Find in source - supportedReviewer 2Tirzepatide reduced the AHI in adults with moderate-to-severe obstructive sleep apnea and obesity.The primary endpoint showed a significant reduction in AHI in both trials, with treatment differences of -20.0 and -23.8 events/hour, both with p<0.001.Evidence: Primary endpoint results in Table 2 and Figure 1.
In trial 1, the mean change in AHI at week 52 was −25.3 events per hour ... with tirzepatide and −5.3 events per hour ... with placebo, for an estimated treatment difference of −20.0 events per hour ... (P<0.001).
Abstractreviewer’s wording - supportedReviewer 2Tirzepatide reduced body weight.Key secondary endpoint showed significant percent change in body weight in both trials.Evidence: Table 2: Percent change in body weight -17.7% vs -1.6% in trial 1, -19.6% vs -2.3% in trial 2.
“Percent change in body weight (95% CI) −17.7 (−19.0 to −16.3) −1.6 (−2.9 to −0.2) −16.1 (−18.0 to −14.2)”
Table 2Find in source - supportedReviewer 2Tirzepatide reduced hypoxic burden, hsCRP, and systolic blood pressure.Key secondary endpoints showed significant improvements in these measures in both trials.Evidence: Table 2: Changes in hypoxic burden, hsCRP, and systolic blood pressure all showed significant treatment differences.
“Change in sleep apnea–specific hypoxic burden at wk 52 (95% CI) — % min/hr −95.2 (−103.2 to −87.2) −25.1 (−44.3 to −5.9) −70.1 (−90.9 to −49.3)”
Table 2Find in source
Premise concern: surrogate not validated for clinical benefit.
- INADEQUATESurrogate endpointThe primary efficacy claim is based on the change in apnea-hypopnea index (AHI), a surrogate endpoint for obstructive sleep apnea. Although the paper cites clinical significance thresholds for AHI, it does not demonstrate target engagement at the tested dose (e.g., PK/PD data) nor cite validated evidence linking AHI reduction to hard clinical outcomes such as cardiovascular events or mortality. The paper acknowledges that PAP therapy, which improves AHI, has not been shown to reduce cardiovascular outcomes, and the trials were not designed to assess long-term cardiovascular outcomes.
“The primary end point was the change in the apnea–hypopnea index (AHI, the number of apneas and hypopneas during an hour of sleep) from baseline.”
- ADEQUATEEffect sizeThe treatment effect on AHI is large and statistically significant: in trial 1, the mean change was -25.3 events/hour with tirzepatide vs -5.3 with placebo (difference -20.0, 95% CI -25.8 to -14.2); in trial 2, -29.3 vs -5.5 (difference -23.8, 95% CI -29.6 to -17.9). The paper anchors this as clinically meaningful by citing the American Academy of Sleep Medicine threshold of AHI ≥15 events/hour and a 50% improvement as clinically relevant. Additionally, a substantial proportion of participants achieved AHI <5 or 5-14 with ESS ≤10 (up to 50.2%).
“This change is considered clinically relevant; the American Academy of Sleep Medicine defines the clinical significance threshold for the AHI as 15 or more events per hour, and other sources have proposed a 50% improvement in AHI as clinically relevant.”
Data authenticity concerns
None foundAn adversarial read for patterns associated with data that may not be genuine: results that look too clean, implausibly large effects, duplicated data or images, and methods that do not match the results reported.
Checked — nothing surfaced.
Reporting gaps
1 finding · worst mediumRequired detail the manuscript never states — study design, biological variables, ethics approval and consent, key resources, statistical reporting, data and code availability, and overall transparency.
- Data/code availability incompleteAssessed
The introduction cites prior research on the pathophysiology of OSA, limitations of existing treatments (PAP, mandibular advancement, surgery), and the role of obesity. It references prior tirzepatide trials showing weight loss and cardiovascular benefits. The rationale for using tirzepatide in OSA is logically developed. Limitations of prior research are implicitly addressed by noting the lack of approved pharmacotherapy and the need for holistic treatment.
“Randomized, controlled trials have failed to show that PAP reduces occurrences of adverse cardiovascular outcomes and death.”
“Treatment with tirzepatide has led to significant reductions in excess body weight, improvements in blood pressure, and reductions in markers of inflammation and vascular endothelial dysfunction, and may have the potential to be efficacious in persons with obstructive sleep apnea.”
“Excess adiposity is a major reversible etiologic risk factor for obstructive sleep apnea and its complications.”
“Randomized, controlled trials have failed to show that PAP reduces occurrences of adverse cardiovascular outcomes and death.”
“Treatment with tirzepatide has led to significant reductions in excess body weight, improvements in blood pressure, and reductions in markers of inflammation and vascular endothelial dysfunction, and may have the potential to be efficacious in persons with obstructive sleep apnea.”
“Here we report the results of the SURMOUNT-OSA phase 3 trials evaluating the safety and efficacy of tirzepatide for the treatment of adults with obstructive sleep apnea and obesity.”
Randomization was conducted via a web-based interactive response system with stratification by trial, region, baseline AHI severity, and sex. Participants, investigators, and sponsor were blinded. A sample size calculation provided at least 90% power. Inclusion/exclusion criteria were pre-specified. The analysis population (ITT) and missing data handling were defined. As a human RCT, replicate_distinction, controls, and independent_replication are not applicable.
“Randomization was conducted by means of a Web-based interactive response system and stratified according to trial, country or geographic region, baseline AHI severity category, and sex.”
“Participants, investigators, and the sponsor were unaware of trial-group assignment.”
“We calculated that a sample size of 206 participants per trial would provide the trial with at least 90% power to show the superiority of tirzepatide to placebo relative to the primary end point at a two-sided significance level of 0.05.”
“Randomization was conducted by means of a Web-based interactive response system and stratified according to trial, country or geographic region, baseline AHI severity category, and sex.”
“Participants, investigators, and the sponsor were unaware of trial-group assignment.”
“We calculated that a sample size of 206 participants per trial would provide the trial with at least 90% power to show the superiority of tirzepatide to placebo relative to the primary end point at a two-sided significance level of 0.05.”
Sex is reported for each group, and both sexes are enrolled, so sex_justified is not applicable. Age, BMI, and health status (e.g., hypertension, prediabetes) are reported. Demographics include race/ethnicity. Species/strain and housing conditions are not applicable for a human trial.
“Female sex — no. (%) 36 (31.6) 41 (34.2) 77 (32.9) 33 (27.5) 32 (27.8) 65 (27.7)”
“Age — yr 47.3±11.0 48.4±11.9 47.9±11.5 50.8±10.7 52.7±11.3 51.7±11.0”
“White 74 (64.9) 80 (66.7) 154 (65.8) 85 (70.8) 86 (75.4) 171 (73.1)”
“Female sex — no. (%) 36 (31.6) 41 (34.2) 77 (32.9) 33 (27.5) 32 (27.8) 65 (27.7)”
“Age — yr 47.3±11.0 48.4±11.9 47.9±11.5 50.8±10.7 52.7±11.3 51.7±11.0”
“Race or ethnic group — no. (%) American Indian or Alaska Native 9 (7.9) 9 (7.5) 18 (7.7) 10 (8.3) 9 (7.9) 19 (8.1)”
The protocol was approved by relevant institutional review boards, and all participants provided written informed consent. The trials were conducted in accordance with ICH-GCP and Declaration of Helsinki. Regulatory compliance is explicitly stated.
“The protocol was approved by the relevant institutional review boards, and all the participants provided written informed consent.”
“The trials were conducted in accordance with the Good Clinical Practice guidelines of the International Council for Harmonisation and the principles of the Declaration of Helsinki.”
“The protocol was approved by the relevant institutional review boards, and all the participants provided written informed consent.”
“all the participants provided written informed consent.”
“The trials were conducted in accordance with the Good Clinical Practice guidelines of the International Council for Harmonisation and the principles of the Declaration of Helsinki.”
Tirzepatide is named with dose and regimen. The paper does not specify the manufacturer or formulation details, but as a drug trial, the product is identified sufficiently for a clinical trial report. Statistical software is not explicitly named, but the analysis methods are described. Antibodies, cell lines, mycoplasma, and organisms are not applicable.
“evaluate the efficacy and safety of the maximum tolerated dose of weekly tirzepatide (10 mg or 15 mg)”
“evaluate the efficacy and safety of the maximum tolerated dose of weekly tirzepatide (10 mg or 15 mg)”
Tests are named (ANCOVA, logistic regression, mixed-model for repeated measures). Assumptions are handled via pre-specified models and multiple imputation. Exact p-values are reported for primary endpoints (P<0.001) and some secondary (P=0.004, P=0.02). Effect sizes with 95% CIs are reported throughout. Statistical software is not identified. Data presentation includes per-group n and confidence intervals. Mathematical plausibility checks are not applicable due to large N and continuous outcomes.
“for an estimated treatment difference of −20.0 events per hour (95% CI, −25.8 to −14.2) (P<0.001)”
“Change in AHI (95% CI) — no. of events/hr −25.3 (−29.3 to −21.2) −5.3 (−9.4 to −1.1) −20.0 (−25.8 to −14.2)”
“P <0.001 for the primary and key secondary end points with the exceptions of the change in hsCRP concentration at week 52 in trial 1 (P = 0.004) and the change in systolic blood pressure at week 48 in trial 2 (P = 0.02).”
The paper mentions 'A data sharing statement provided by the authors is available with the full text of this article at NEJM.org.' This is vague and does not specify the mechanism or conditions. No repository deposit or accession numbers are provided. Code sharing is not applicable as no custom code is described.
The trial is registered (NCT05412004). Methods are comprehensive. Limitations are explicitly discussed. Conclusions are proportional to the evidence. Funding and COI are disclosed. Reporting guideline (CONSORT) is not explicitly mentioned, but the paper follows standard reporting.
“SURMOUNT-OSA ClinicalTrials.gov number, NCT05412004”
“Interpretation of the current findings should take into account the potential limitations of our trials.”
“Supported by Eli Lilly.”
“SURMOUNT-OSA ClinicalTrials.gov number, NCT05412004”
“Interpretation of the current findings should take into account the potential limitations of our trials.”
“Supported by Eli Lilly.”
Registered (2 IDs: ClinicalTrials.gov). No reporting guideline cited.
Broken references and links
None found · partly checkedReferences checked against Crossref, OpenAlex and Retraction Watch for retractions and resolvability, plus declared data and code links probed for whether they resolve to content matching the paper.
Nothing surfaced — but not everything feeding this category ran (missing: data/code link verification), so read this as a partial clean bill.
Checked 40 references by DOI: 1 verified — 39 no DOI (shown, not verified).
- NO DOIAdult obstructive sleep apnoeaNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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- NO DOIEstimation of the global prevalence and burden of obstructive sleep apnoea: a literature-based analysisNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
- NO DOICPAP for prevention of cardiovascular events in obstructive sleep apneaNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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- NO DOIThe role of weight management in the treatment of adult obstructive sleep apnea: an official American Thoracic Society clinical practice guidelineNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
- NO DOIPractice parameters for the medical therapy of obstructive sleep apneaNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
- NO DOISleep apnea: types, mechanisms, and clinical cardiovascular consequencesNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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- NO DOIThe hypoxic burden of sleep apnoea predicts cardiovascular disease-related mortality: the Osteoporotic Fractures in Men Study and the Sleep Heart Health StudyNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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- NO DOINew strategies for confirmatory testing of secondary hypotheses on combined data from multiple trialsNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
- NO DOIPhysiological consequences of CPAP therapy withdrawal in patients with obstructive sleep apnoea-an opportunity for an efficient experimental modelNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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- NO DOIClinical guideline for the evaluation, management and long-term care of obstructive sleep apnea in adultsNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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- NO DOIThe sleep apnea-specific hypoxic burden predicts incident heart failureNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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- NO DOIWeight reduction and the impact on apnea- hypopnea index: a meta-analysisNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
- NO DOILong term maintenance of weight loss with non-surgical interventions in obese adults: systematic review and meta-analyses of randomised controlled trialsNo DOI in the reference — shown for manual review; not independently verifiable (not a fabrication signal).
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Copyediting
4 minorWording, consistency and formatting errors that need correcting before submission.
No major wording or formatting errors. 4 minor suggestions below.
4 copyedit issues flagged: mostly consistency, clarity.
- MINORconsistencyAbstract, Results“for an estimated treatment difference of −20.0 events per hour (95% CI, −25.8 to −14.2) (P<0.001)”→ Remove extra parenthesis before P<0.001.Minor punctuation issue.
- MINORconsistencyResults, Sleep-Disordered Breathing-Related End Points“for an estimated treatment difference of −23.8 events per hour (95% CI, −29.6 to −17.9), (P<0.001)”→ Remove comma before parenthesis.Minor punctuation issue.
- MINORconsistencyAbstract, Results“In trial 1, the mean change in AHI at week 52 was −25.3 events per hour (95% confidence interval [CI], −29.3 to −21.2) with tirzepatide and −5.3 events per hour (95% CI, −9.4 to −1.1) with placebo, for an estimated treatment difference of −20.0 events per hour (95% CI, −25.8 to −14.2) (P<0.001).”→ Consider adding a comma before the parenthetical p-value for consistency with other sentences.Minor punctuation.
- MINORclarityMethods, Trial Procedures“Participants were required to receive tirzepatide or placebo during a planned 52-week period that included a dose-escalation period of up to 20 weeks and a 4-week safety follow-up.”→ Clarify that the 52-week period includes the dose-escalation and follow-up, or specify the treatment duration separately.Potential ambiguity.
The published work is methodologically robust and well-reported; an informed reader should weigh the minor reporting gaps (data sharing details, statistical software, CONSORT) and the small internal discrepancy in trial 2 participant counts. No erratum is warranted for the core findings, but the data availability statement could be clarified.
- 1.HIGHdata codeIn the Data Availability section, specify the data sharing mechanism (e.g., via a data access committee or platform like Vivli) and conditions for access, rather than just referring to a statement at NEJM.org.The current statement is vague and does not meet transparency expectations for clinical trial data.
- 2.HIGHstatisticsIn the Statistical Analysis section, explicitly name the statistical software and version used (e.g., SAS 9.4).Identifying the software is a standard reporting requirement and aids reproducibility.
- 3.MEDIUMreportingIn the Methods, add a statement that the trial was reported in accordance with CONSORT guidelines, or provide a completed CONSORT checklist as supplementary material.Explicit adherence to reporting guidelines enhances transparency and completeness.
- 4.MEDIUMstatisticsIn the Results, consider reporting exact p-values for primary endpoints (e.g., P=0.0001) instead of threshold-only P<0.001.Exact p-values provide more information and are preferred for transparency.
- 5.MEDIUMreportingIn the Discussion, discuss the generalizability of the findings to populations not included in the trial (e.g., non-obese OSA patients) more explicitly.Addressing generalizability helps readers interpret the scope of the results.
- 6.MEDIUMreportingIn Table 4, clarify the discrepancy in the number of tirzepatide-treated participants in trial 2 (119 vs 120 in Table 1) by explaining that one participant did not receive the drug.An unexplained internal inconsistency could raise concerns about data integrity.
- 7.LOWcopyeditIn the Abstract, Results, remove the extra parenthesis before P<0.001 in the sentence about the treatment difference.Minor punctuation error that should be corrected for clarity.
- 8.LOWcopyeditIn the Results, Sleep-Disordered Breathing-Related End Points, remove the comma before the parenthetical p-value.Minor punctuation error that should be corrected for consistency.
- 9.LOWcopyeditIn the Methods, Trial Procedures, clarify that the 52-week period includes the dose-escalation period and safety follow-up, or specify the treatment duration separately.The current wording is ambiguous about the exact treatment duration.
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